After showing our first draft, we have made a few adaptions due to the responses we received.
75% of our responses said that they were impressed by our opening, with the remaining 25% finding it average. This gives us motivation that we only need to make minimal adaptions. Our genre is clear as everyone knew the trailer was Social Realism, and the responses that we intended for where given, with emotional responses like "really intrigued and sad" and "i'm holding back tears".
Due to the constructive criticism received from our first viewing we have decided to take out the itching shots as we believe it isn't needed to show the protagonist's decline. To link the beginning to the rest of the trailer we have inserted a black screen with message alerts playing as this emphasises our theme of the dangers of technology and links the bedroom scenes into the breakdown through emphasising how the sex tape spreads. Our font was not ready for the first viewing but has now been changed also.
We also discovered that our music in the second half of the trailer was copyright free, so had to find another peice of music for the second half of the trailer. We actually preferred this music, and found it very effective.
Here is the trailer we showed:
Here is the trailer after our adaptions were made:
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